What you read is the third draft of the story. Ben Wilson in the first version is the killer is believed the best on the square, but then finds the witness is killed by her, the beautiful Chloe. Unfortunately, with this choice I say goodbye to the first-person narrative, typical of the stories I wanted to make a film noir parody. If Ben dies, who is telling the story? Patience I tell myself, change the ending. Ben kills the girl. Possible that the bad guy can never accomplish your work?
happens, however, even hacks like me, the author binds to a certain person and I must say the truth, Cloe I like her. In addition the girl, for a fee (I swear I stretched some bills) asked me if he could stay alive. I accepted, so in this third version of Ben Wilson becomes the detective who protects and falls in love with Chloe. Plot of noir corny. Farewell to the originality and all the rest.
do not know if you liked the story, maybe not, but this is the only version that the only result that satisfies me.
Who cares, I can add that Chloe has testified. Tuner was sentenced to the electric chair and, at this time, Wilson and Chloe are on a board to surf in the ocean. Ben continues his work but only accepts jobs that allow him to stay close to Chloe.
I apologize for the language is not always polite, but some terms were needed for this type of story.
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